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Old 24th March 2006, 01:43
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Lightbulb Why Did I Do This?

The reason I did this...
What is this?
I did this to inflict pain...
What is pain?


I did this and it hurts us all..
What is hurts?
This pain hurts!

Why did I do this...
What is this?
I did this to see what it means...
What is means?
I did this to find love..
What is love?
This means love!

Why did I do this?
What is this?
The reason is?
What is?
I did this to see if it is you
Is this you?
This is you!

This pain hurts!
This means love!
This is you!
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Old 24th March 2006, 01:44
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I dance circles around you,
Untouchable, I think...
But you see inside me.
Your brown eyes


Illuminate.
I freeze
In your bright vision,
Can't seem to move away
In time
To save myself.
You drop your heart on me,
And I can't stop
From feeling again,
Can't stop from feeling you.
I sense you from across the room,
Across the town,
Your essence permeating,
My thoughts there where you are.
You bring me flowers from the moon,
What am I supposed to do?
Romanticize the stone
That's been my heart?
My heart an unknown
To you till now,
But known across the ages
Somehow...
My fears clinging to the sorrow
Of old hurts
And dreams gone dry
As you get to the marrow
Of this thing that lies
Between us.
And ahead, the hopes
That nearly died
Until you stoked the fires
Within us,
Blowing embers on the sparks
That flame within our hearts
To warm the hearth of our souls.
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Old 24th March 2006, 01:47
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You gave me life...
When no one was there
You gave me hope...
When no one would care

You gave me strength...
When I was weak
You gave me love...
Only u could keep
You gave mw warmth...
When I was cold
You gave me a chance...
And someone to hold
You healed my heart...
And cured my fears
You healed my scars...
And wiped my tears
You gave me peace...
In a lifetime of war...
You gave me everything...
Why should I ask for more
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Old 24th March 2006, 02:06
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Originally Posted by freemocy
The reason I did this...
What is this?
I did this to inflict pain...
What is pain?


I did this and it hurts us all..
What is hurts?
This pain hurts!

Why did I do this...
What is this?
I did this to see what it means...
What is means?
I did this to find love..
What is love?
This means love!

Why did I do this?
What is this?
The reason is?
What is?
I did this to see if it is you
Is this you?
This is you!

This pain hurts!
This means love!
This is you!
Why did you do this?
what is this?
this poem is a crap
what is crap?
crap is when you have lots of bull$hit
this means u suck!!
this is you!
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Old 24th March 2006, 02:29
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Is this crap ?
Probably you dont know what is it?
It is called Art of playing with words
Not anyone can decipher it but the elites..
You seem to be under the average level..
This is you !
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Old 24th March 2006, 02:32
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Is this crap ?
Probably you dont know what is it?
It is called Art of playing with words
Not anyone can decipher it but the elites..
You seem to be under the average level..
This is you !

Is this Art?
Its a real massive madness usage of words
Noone will approve or get along with
You not taking good care of ur brain
this is you!!


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Old 24th March 2006, 02:41
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Certainly not !!
Beauty of Art not..
In adequacy but in uniqueness..
You dont have to understand most..
of the time but pretend to..
You are unskillful..
This is you !
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