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Old 13th March 2006, 21:56
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Slow Tears

I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:15
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shkoun hedel maskhota le kheletek haka?

no seriously nice poem...but sad!

here's another sad one.....

The light in my life
has now gone dim.
Dark now are the days
and nights here within.

Times once were bright
and full of fun.
Now the clock has stopped
and good times are done

Does the mention of my name
bring thoughts to your mind.
Of a faded love
that you left behind.

The burning candle in your window
that you said was meant for me.
I think you pulled the shades
for the light I cannot see.

right im off to find a happy one now!
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:21
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OH Mselya!!! u got me worried, we might have lost FreeMocy, we dont wanna lose you too..........are you sure you gonan show up Tomorrow??? whats wrong with those sad poems?!!! i don't wanan read one n then go by the waterfall.........Mselya don't take teh waterfall Tomorrow....try a pool! so i can jump in to save u!!
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:25
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dont worry Larache im not throwing myself off anything!!

i was simply adding to Freemocy's list of sad poems before he left us!
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:32
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That's at least a good news for Today i am happy for you
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:34
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Thanks ...im scared of heights!!
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Old 14th March 2006, 17:42
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oh is this a virgo thing!!! i scare height too wellah debesah...!!
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