keep the poem.....going!

where are all the poets out there?
ive' started a poem, with the hope you will add to it and keep it going....for a larf!
it can be serious or as crazy as you like! just pick up from where someone has left off.

Crazy love

Night and day
ken 7lem bik

What have you done to me?
ghaadi en tsaata 3lik

If i close my eyes
tey beno liya 3ainik

Its a struggle
fi ghaybik

Ya weld lah3aram ken mout a3lik

[Ghazala]

It has a very Najat thing about it. What tune do you sing this little ditty to?

[razrif]

How can i sing the words
if i don't know the tune?

i didnt have a tune!! i just put the words together!!

[Lotfi-dz]

Ken enshof Zinik ya Gzali
Koul Youm Ezed Hebali
Fi lil wela fin nehar,
Raki Dema, Dema Fi galbi…

I maked it up

[razrif]

No.....not a word!

Originally Posted by Lotfi-dz

Ken enshof Zinik ya Gzali
Koul Youm Ezed Hebali
Fi lil wela fin nehar,
Raki Dema, Dema Fi galbi…

I maked it up

how can a young hoodlum be so romantic???
very nice innit!