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Old 24th April 2005, 09:49
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Old 24th April 2005, 13:54
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Hey Scott, checked out the song, sounded pretty good. I think it is great for media type o' things.



Constructive critisism:
Couple of the chords go on a bit too long, they do not fit the time sequence, maybe a little step editing is needed.
I listened to the track from a laptop, could not tell if there was a bassline or not. If not I think bassline would give it a good groove.



Keep up the good work Scott.
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Old 24th April 2005, 15:17
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I didn't like to say but
I agree about the bass.
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Old 26th April 2005, 15:38
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Thanks for the feedback, I does need a good bass line in there. I've stopped writing music for the forseeable future and this track is quite hastily put together.

I've really thought about things and I do waste a lot of time making quite mediocre music, I'm going to spend my time on photography which where my real skills are.
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Old 26th April 2005, 15:59
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Why the "mediocre" ?

Why stop? Combine the two. Do what you enjoy, doing!
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Old 26th April 2005, 17:11
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Thanks for the feedback, I does need a good bass line in there. I've stopped writing music for the forseeable future and this track is quite hastily put together.

I've really thought about things and I do waste a lot of time making quite mediocre music, I'm going to spend my time on photography which where my real skills are.
Don't stop! Just keep plugging away!
I too stop once and a while, it is good to clear the head but it is better to jump back in it.

If you are stuck on basslines start off by playing the 5th of the chords. Adjust to taste.
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Old 26th April 2005, 17:13
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Are your photos mediocre too?
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