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Old 9th May 2009, 14:40
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Patroling: Act III, Scene II

Act III, Scene II
The stage is a street intersection. It is night time. There are shops with apartments above. Lotfi and Van Helsing are patroling together. Since vampires are only out during the night hours, it is not necessary to patrol duriong the day.
The men have discussed the most recent murder which is one of Lotfi's men. The DNA proves that the same females murdered him as Abdullah. Van Helsing still believes that Dra Cu La, StarGem and Jasmin are the culprits. Lotfi tells him he needs evidence. Tomorrow night they will stake out the Villa of the Count.
Lotfi: "Tetouania tells us all that happened was a dream, but how would she know that there would be no reflection of the count in the mirror. She also saw the bat outside hovering on the balconey after the count left the bedroom."
Van Helsing: "I do not beleive this was a dream either. Dra Cu La probably had her in a trance. He is able to do this."
Lotfi: "My men separated last evening which I did not want them to do. Ziere saw two young women walking but when he went around the corner to talk with them, they were gone. they just seemed to disappear from site."
Van Helsing: "We will separate ourselves but you must have your whistle and the prayer beads in hand. the MIz??? will help to deter them. Dra Cu La is only interested in women. The two female vampires are stake outs most likely. Do not get affixed with their stares. I am sure they know we are out here."
No sooner than the two men separate and StarGem and Jasmin are around the corner. they wear their black capes and the hoods are up.
StarGem and Jasmin: "Lotfi," they whisper." Lotfi_dz, won't you join us. It is dark out here and we really would like a strong man to walk with us." They do mesmerize and Lotfi is having a difficult time warding them off. The vampires have a magnetic pull. Lotfi blows the whistle some but not really loud. Finally as the two vampires approach he holds up his Miz???(prayer beads) StarGem and Jasmin hiss. Their fangs already protruded. they bring their arm up with their cape over it and cover their face. They become bats and fly away. Lotfi has all the proof he needs. He blows his whistle loud and van Helsing returns. Lotfi explains to Van Helsing all that happened.
Van Helsing: "They are not as experienced as the count or they would not have let you see them convert to being bats. we should check on Magistrate Hossem's house and make sure they are all well."
This is what the men do and then they continue to patrol the neighborhood.
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I have decided that mahmoud saad el and noufk will be extras. we will see what the extras could do if all this works out. I do not want a curator for the Art Gallery. LaCasbah runs that.
Spring-smile can play the part of Octo. He is from MoroccanStar.co.UK
I will work out the people who have parts in the Wizard of Rabat and the Flying Carpet.
DrJames can not be the doctor on Argos because I think he is a minister and he prostalizes.He is a black person and the only other part he could do is be the spiritual adviser of the Prince Aboto. But DrJames may be out. If I do get help all of these things will be worked out.
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Old 11th May 2009, 14:27
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DNA, Act III, Scene III

Act III, Scene III
It is the next evening. Lotfi and Van Helsing are at the villa of the count. Lotfi has posted two of his men at Magistrate Hossem's house and they are to patrol around the house to make sure that the vampire does not return.
Van Helsing has told Chief Lotfi that he believes that the count wishes for Tetouania to be one of his female vampires with StarGem and Jasmin. Michael believes that they are the count's wives and he would also like Tetouania. Michael suspects that Dra Cu La would have Tetouania kill Lotfi and truly make her to be evil like himself.
The two men have decided to get some DNA samples for Adil to prove that the count and his wives really are the murderers of the local people.Lotfi and Van Helsing are at the villa. They peek into the cellar through the window and they see the coffins in the basement. They must have hair or saliva for DNA. Lotfi and Michael decide to go into the basement. The vampires are out as it is now evening. Lotfi has men patroling all around Damascus.
The men enter the basement from right stage and light the oil lamp. There are three coffins. One against the back wall and the other two run lengthwise on the right and left walls. There are no locks on the coffins. Van Helsing tells Lotfi to look for strands of hair which is what they do. The men are able to get samples from each pillow of the coffins. They hear something and quickly leave. It is near daybreak. The oil lamp is still on and the coffins are up. Dra Cu La will see this and be furious but there will be no time to look for intruders as the vampires must return to their coffins.
Lotfi and Van Helsing have left and they will go right to the morgue to speak with Adil. They must check the DNA and return to the villa before sunset if the DNA proves to be the Count and his sisters.
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LaCasbah sits in the theatre row that Ahmed and his party are in. LaCasbah is mid row perhaps with a woman with him.
The orchestra is located in the balconey. The platforms are teired for the musicians to sit and the piano is located at the center row and so is the organ. Some of the music for the play is from the organ. It is spooky.
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The Silver Stakes, Act III Scene IV

Act III, Scene IV
Chief Lotfi and Van Helsing have made their way back to the Count's Villa. Magistrate Hossem is with them. They are now at the front of the villa.
Van Helsing: "We must kill the vampires while they are in their coffins and it is still daylight. Do you men have your Tasbihs with you?"
Magistrate: "We do. Right Lotfi?"
Lotfi: "I have them."
Van Helsing: "Wear them around your neck so they can be seen. Put your Quran in your shirt pocket. They will be weakened."
Magistrate Hossem gives a pocket Quran to Michael. "For you."
VanHelsing: "Thank you." Van Helsing wears rosary beads around his neck.
Lotfi: "Does the garlic help?"
Van Helsing: "It does." The three men wear strings of garlic around their neck and wrists. "I think we are protected now."
The men had visited with Adil at the morgue. The strands of hair from Dra Cu La, StarGem and Jasmin confirm the DNA from the victims are theirs.This is enough evidence for the Magistrate to okay hunting them down. They are of the supernatural and not true humans. It would be impossible to catch them and try them. They decide to listen to Van Helsing and do away with the murderers.
Magistrate Hossem insists on going with Lotfi and Michael to the villa. They have been sharpening the Silver Stakes all afternoon. Finally it is time to go. When they approach the villa they tie their horses and travel on foot. they are now in front of the villa and it is five fifteen.
Van Helsing: "We have the Silver Stakes and our mallets. We must not waste time. We will go around the villa to the side and enter by the basement door."
The men exit stage left. The backdrop of the front of the villa separates and reveals the basement again. Chief Lotfi, Van Helsing and Magistrate Hossem can bee seen looking in the basement window. Bashir has just left fot the village so they know the house is empty except for the vampires.Van Helsing motions for them to go. They enter the basement stage left. You can see the daylight is dimming.
Van Helsing: "They will awake when the stke is pressed against them. Do not hesitate. They are strong and we do not have much time. Lotfi will do Dra Cu La, Magistrate, you do Jasmin. she is over there and I will do starGem. Lift the lid of the coffin when I tell you."
The men position themselves in front of their assigned coffin and on Van Helsing's signal they lift the lid. The vampires are sleeping. The coffins are raised and the vampires rest on the top. They are not sunk down in their coffins. The bodies are visible to the audience.
Van Helsing nods his head and the men position the stake against the body where the heart is located. Dra Cu La hisses but it is still daylight. Not by much thought. Van Helsing speaks up, "Now" and slams the mallot against the Silver Stake. Lotfi and Magistrate do the same.
Van Helsing: "It is done. By tomorrow thw vampires will just be dust in their coffins and the Silver stake will remain in their coffins.They must be sent back to Budapest for burial. I myself will accompany them. Tell Bashir that they are returning to Edena and he can stay on and take care of this villa."
The lids of the coffins are closed. Van Helsing shakes hands with Chief Lotfi and the Magistrate. Lotfi: "Now Damascus will be safe once again." The three men exit stage left and the curtain closes.. The audience applauds.
The curtain opens and Adil, Bashir, Rudolfo, Mara, Abdullah, the Waiter and the captain step foward and bow. Mara curtseys. The stage hands step back and the curtain closes.
The curtain opens and Magistrate Hossem and Aunt travler bow and curtsey. Step back and the curtain closes.
The curtain opens and Michael Van Helsing bows and motions to Adonis. The curtain closes.
The curtain opens and Lotfi and Tetouania step forward, bow and curtsey. they step back. The audience has been applauding. The curtain closes.
This time the curtain opens and Dra Cu La, Stargem and Jasmin step forward, bow and curtsey. StarGem and Jasmin extend their hand to Dra Cu La, they step back, turn and exit stage right and stage left. Dra Cu La makes one more bow and the curtain closes.
Adonis and Dehia are pleased and make their way backstage. Malika tells Ishtar she had a lovely time and now she is going back to the RainForest and then she was gone. The orchestra has been playing and the people of the audience slowly make their way out of the theatre.
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La-Casbah_com sits toward the other end of the row where Ahmed and his people are. La-Casbah_com is with a woman and they are about three seats in from their end.
They are all in the fifth row from the stage.

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Old 18th May 2009, 14:47
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Red face Flashbacks: Dra Cu La, The Play

When Magistrate Hossem gives van Helsing a copy of the Quran he also gives him Tasbih Beads for himself. Michael puts the Tasbih beads around his neck, They will need all the help they can get. The men had been working on the Silver stakes most of the afternoon. They are a foot long and very sharp. Lotfi carves a Crescent Moon on the head of each stake. This will seal the death of the vampires.

There will be a female coranor. Her name is Stacia. There will be a metal frame with a cloth curtain to devide the morgue. Adil will work on the right side with Abdullah and stacia will work on the left side of the curtain and work on Mara.

Stacia and Mara take care of the wardrobe of the actors and they help the girls change between the scenes of the play.

After the play is over there will be the curtain calls where the actors come out and take their bows. The stagehands will be first. First Bashir and Rudolfo, next will be the Waiter, then their will be Adil, Mara, Stacia and Abdullah. Finally there will be the Captain. Then the curtain will close and then go on for the Main characters of the story.
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I have decided that Masan82 will play the part of Cassem and he can use his name Masan.
Kamar will be the Proprietor of the Moroccan Shipping Company and he is married to Amiraa.
razan can be one of the guards at the dungeon on Zergos. He will be with AdamFL and Aziz.
ianlou143 can be the defender of Bruckos and his men at the trial. He is one of Akbar's men. Bruckos still needs to be defended in absentia. This should leave twenty three with Octo and his men.
I still need the cast of the "Wizard of Rabat and the Flying Carpet". And I need the Doctor on Argos to work on the Plague where the slaves are.

Any Italians except for Aswad will be in the village of Conception with Voltaires_priest. I do not know if the screenwriter could do this or not. We will see what happens.
pancit is some Phillapino so he can be with Juan Paolo on the GreenPeace ship, the Esperanza. These things will place a few more of the people. For now the rest are considered extras. If the story gets go, we will see what we can do for them. They will be Searched to see if they are still around. If people did not make posts they might not have a part. If they want a movie I will not work with anyone unless you guys get to play your parts.

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The balconey has three platforms behind the inner rail. The openings of the rail step up six inches to the first platform which is three and one half feet wide, then a six inch step up to the second platform which is the same and then a step up to the third platform which is six feet wide. The platforms are where the orchestra sit and play their instruments. The pipe organ is centered on the top platform against the wall. Downstairs on the main floor of the theatre the piano is against the stage. The piano is centered also.

LaCasbah sits in the sixth seat from the left aisle of the row that Ahmed and his party sit. LaCasbah has a very pretty women with him and she is seated to his right.

Tetouania has been a very innocent and protected daughter of Magistrate Hossem. Her mother died when she was seven years old. That is when Aunt travler came to live with them.

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I just want to say that I watch the world news most nights and I see all of the terrible things that go on in the world. I do care about the things I see. I do not want people here to think I am just an airhead. I hope that this story makes things cherrier here. I hope it does get finished and we get a movie. If I could see the people here get to do that then I will be happy and I hope that you guys will be happy too. I also have the names of people on the pages from MoroccoDiscussions and I think they were all from morocco.com There were not too many people from MoroccoDiscussions.com web site and they finally shut down. I hope I get to find the three or four other people that were there.
I see that Ahlam_2005 is back. He has been in the story since the early part with SidiMoulay, Brahimi and Fawal. Fahd has been added to be with them. When I did not find Ahlam in a search I made a change and put him in Larache4eva's Militia but then I saw he has numbers with his name and did make quite a few posts so I put him back with Sidi and the others like he originally was.

I have decided to keep the name Isis for the secret planet as I originally had it. Isis from northafricaonline will have to change her name. Isis and Yazz may be Tunisia so they will have to be at the Station in Tunisia Province in the story. They may have children with them. Their own if they have them.

LalaMimi will be in Agadir with Marocchic. Mimi will be in charge of the women when there is trouble. There may be sick people or wounded. This has to be worked out. They will be at the school to make the cure if they decide to work with Ishtar.

"The Wizard of Tehran and the Flying Carpet" Fanta(Wunir) will play the Hero. He is nineteen I think. nfoukh will be the uncle and habrifaqir will be the older man with the five daughters. They are some of the cast for this. habrifaqir will be assistant with Anisa and he is in the play as an actor. He is responsible to help the actors with their lines if they get stuck.

If African sweets is a dark AfricanAmerican she will have to be with the Prince's people on Bacuda. If she is Arab she will be the Princess in the play with the Hero. She is seventeen. This will be decided.

Sex is hard to determine by names. Iman may be femalt which means she can't go on the trek to the Black Pyramids. This means that Kaniff and Iman will switch parts. If Iman is she I will find someone else for that part. Kaniff also gets to play the part of Santiago. That is not a good name for a Colombian so the name Santiago is changed to Carlos.

dattaswami will be the doctor on Argos. I will find and assistant.

Anne Sophie will be an Oblikan. She will testify at Bruckos and his men's trial. One of the young guys Bruckos has is her brother.

Cuts:labcenter, zee21, Greenbage,Morocco4Obama are cut. They are professionals and I want to stick with people who are social. J.Ed is also cut. He made one post about going on a trip. These people are permanently cut from the story. There may be more cuts of extras.

The Druids will probably be called the djinns. They are not invisible here. That would make the fight too difficult unless I can think of a way around this.

Iman is she I'll put her in Jadida helping.

If Anisa has a teen son he could play the part of Barok.

"I hope we get help"
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VanHelsing has put his belongings on the bed in the room he uses at Lotfi's house. The valise will be used to carry the Silver Stakes and the mallots. The Silver Stakes are made at the blacksmith's barn. After that Lotfi, Van Helsing and Magistrate Hossem leave for Dra Cu La's Villa.

Ilyes will be the oarsman on the boat that takes Ishtar along the River Styx to the afterlife. Ilyes will also be the brother in "The Wizard of Tehran and the Flying Carpet". There is a photo of an Ilyes on Facebook. Maybe that is him. I have seen some photos of you guys. One is LalaMimi with her teddy bear.

Guest will play the part of Lilly(EvaLOngoria's sister) and Jessica23 will be one of the Oblikan slaves on Argos.

The parts of Iman and Kaniff will stay as I wrote them. If Iman is she we could pretend she is Kaniff's younger brother. Kaniff also plays the part of Carlos(Santiago).

This library is closed Monday so I will not be back to work on this story until next Saturday. I will work on parts that I already posted because some of them should be expanded. And also the play with Malik, the Wizard of Tehran.

I decided to straighten some things out before I continue and when I do this these things are notes to me.

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First I must post some notes before I continue.

the-sword plays the part of Ahmed.
Masan will be known as Masan Kassem(instead of Cassem) and Rashid is the new name for Omar.
If Yazz and Isis are not Tunesian, Yazz will be the wife of MoulahSultan and Isis is her friend.
The Moroccan law student located in Oman will be MohammedUK"s First Lieutenant, not helping with the prosecutor of Bruckos. Someone has that job already.
Sophia will be in the village of Conception with the Italians.
dattaswami's Assistant will be shadow.
Some of these people are from MoroccanStar.co.UK
Since divine_quran is Pakistani he can own the religious shop in Jadida and he can also be one of the Pakistanis who makes the deal about the rifles with Razrif, Freemoncy and Pharess. He will need a second name for this.
Menske is a member of MoroccoDiscussions.com and he was there when I was there. He was seventy then and he is one of the Ancients. I hope he is well and knows about this story. I hope the story makes him smile.
This story was started on Morocco.com and was supposed to stay there but I started to get error reports and loose the page I wrote. When error report comes up you loose your work so I went to MoroccoDiscussions.com to continue. I had already been talking to the people there. Abdelilah had invited me to this site.
If names do not sound familiar that is because some are from MoroccoDiscussions.com, NorthAfricaOnline.com, and MoroccanStar.co.UK. Most of the people are from Morocco.com
I have tried to be fair with placing people with parts in this story. The plan is that you guys get to do this and get paid. I hope for the best and I am doing what I can.
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THE MOROCCAN GIRLS AND THEIR KITTENS
Amie and Amaraa are sisters. Amie is the younger. She is seven years old. Amaraa is ten years old. Amaraa recently had her birthday Their grandfather had brought them a five week old kitten from the western part of their country, Morocco. The Grandfather had been visiting their Mother's sister who is their Aunt.
to be continued
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