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Old 30th August 2009, 18:05
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Some changes

First of all Octo does not like Bruckos either. He has gained his own power and Quado wants him and his men done. When I know what Octo is and his crimes I will put them in the story.
I decide I want Masan82 to remain the Moroccan Shipping Proprietor and Amira to be his wife. Masan82's part will continue. This means the part of Cassem and Octo are still open. Kamar and Abdel_X will be guards at the Dungeon on Zergos and Abdel_X is one of the wounded.
butterfly1 will be one of the women making the potion at the school instead of one of the fairies. Arven can be one of the fairies. She cannot be a Queen because a few of the fairies are Princesses. Arven will have to be a cousin to the Princesses.
Moroccan-The-Snake will have to be one of Larache's men. shamaliya will have the part Snake had and shamaliya will travel with Ahmed to the BlackPyramids and Mercula.(I think)
benben can be Abdelilah's Moroccan reporter and travel with Ahmed and the others. If you read the story you would understand the things I say.
Sorry I interupted benben's Happy Ramadan but I will post it back after this is on for a day or two. I did not know how else to let him know about his part in the story. I have benben's name for a long time now so I am glad he is back.
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I have to make a change. I want to keep Octo and his men loyal to Bruckos. If Druids can be loyal.
If benben is not Moroccan he can have the part MoroccanSnake had and shamaliya will stay as Abdelilah's Moroccan reporter. These two parts are close. They both travel with Ahmed.

Last edited by WitchQueen; 30th August 2009 at 21:15. Reason: Added Something
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